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Goodbye
Contributed by
insane_outsider
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Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I looked into your eyes,
and said you are my anti depressant.
You glanced back in surprise,
then beamed to me a fake smile.
I believed the smile was real,
only because I was scared of the truth.
The truth is...
I screw up every thing.
Well I'm sorry,
Sorry that I came into your life.
Sorry that things didnt work out.
Sorry that I have to leave you.
I doubt you care though,
you were probably going to end it sooner or later.
So I come to an end,
and say my final goodbye...
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insane_outsider
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2003-04-05 13:35:00]
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Re: Goodbye
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by Dreamer18 on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 02:02:42 PM AEST
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| It always hurts to say good-bye to someone you love but I guess thats just what has to be done, rite? Well it was an awesome poem. I enjoyed reading it very musch. I hope to read more of your poems later on.... |
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Re: Goodbye
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by stargazer on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 11:11:47 PM AEST
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Its incredibly hard to say goodbye to someone when you are still madly in love with them but its for the best. I can relate to this poem and the emotion behind your simple but meaningful. Nicely done....
Amy |
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