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Last Long Walk
Contributed by
NewGuy
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Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 09:58:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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A darken corner hides my face
as travelers pass me by
each one longing sweet embrace
from someone other than I
the road grows long under the shade
as the twlight nears
the memory of even seeing me fades
gone before the year
bitter leaves beneath my feet
surrendering at last
now I go to take my seat
relegated to the past
Copyright ©
NewGuy
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2009-12-15 21:58:06]
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Re: Last Long Walk
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 10:31:50 PM AEST
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Short but powerful write.
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Re: Last Long Walk
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 02:46:26 AM AEST
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This poem feels so real. It had me in limbo
for a while, makes you think doesn't it?
Superb write!
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Re: Last Long Walk
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by corpsman2000 on
Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 10:15:55 AM AEST
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This definetely makes you think, it could have many meanings depending on the reader.
Very well written. Good job |
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Re: Last Long Walk
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by Lyre on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2010 @ 09:31:42 PM AEST
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| A picturesque work of art! |
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