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Lost in the rain
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 09:18:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Puddles are forming, breaking their banks
turning into little rivers of formed pain.
The cold Washington winter rain
haunting the souls once again.
Somewhere out in the dark,
the hands of night enfold him.....
Lost in the shadows, the wet takes him in
chilling hands touching all hearts......
Things need to be this way sometimes
Lost in the driving Washington rain.
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shelby
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2009-12-15 21:18:51]
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Re: Lost in the rain
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by Fuzzy on
Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 02:53:49 AM AEST
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Well written.
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Re: Lost in the rain
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 04:00:01 PM AEST
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I can certainly relate to that cold Washington rain.
Good work girl.
huggs,
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Re: Lost in the rain
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by deadwriter on
Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 07:23:27 PM AEST
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The chilling hands are warmed by the love in your heart. Fantastic write my friend.
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Re: Lost in the rain
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by Spike on
Monday, 15th February 2010 @ 04:05:02 AM AEST
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nicely expressed separation reality, with just a touch of the beautiful blues inherent in the dark and rain.
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