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Twisted Exsistence
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 08:17:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Resistance is futile
but
why I am here
is not clear...
emotions flow
out of control
nothing makes sense
there is no compassion anywhere.
I stumble like a confused clown
as something deep
drops
into my mind,
emotionally
I am so twisted
I don't care if I live or die.
I exsist here
but I don't wanna
melting
in this burning confusion
that is filled with doom,
I feel like I am in suspended animation
as I watch the evil
that people do.
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unknown_utopia
... [
2009-12-15 08:17:51]
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Re: Twisted Exsistence
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 09:02:28 AM AEST
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Yes, really like this well written.
Take care
Resistance is futile
but
why I am here
is not clear...
emotions flow
out of control
nothing makes sense
there is no compassion anywhere.
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Re: Twisted Exsistence
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by duff on
Monday, 18th October 2010 @ 10:05:20 PM AEST
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Powerful words and although the content is sad it really shows the point. Its always nice to read something that you can relate to. A bold and well written piece.
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