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Paradise Lost
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 09:14:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I'm a fun boy one
who's become a shadow
and now
I am just a face
in the crowd....
my spirits is broken
my hearts been shattered,
I shiver and shake
as I slowly breakdown.
I'm in love with love
but
love don't love me,
Love always leaves
after
it comes on so strong.
I keep pretending
that it doesn't matter
but still I wait
for the one to come.
I'm gonna fall in love again
although
I don't wanna,
I can't explain it
I just know that it's true.
I shiver and shake
and I
tremble and moan,
because I don't know what else to do.
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unknown_utopia
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2009-12-14 21:14:34]
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Re: Paradise Lost
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 09:44:46 PM AEST
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The title is what drew me to this and Im glad I stopped in to read.
Deeply moving poem.
Though darn sad, whats up with everyone being sad? I think it is floating in the air everywhere.
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Re: Paradise Lost
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by Fuzzy on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 01:21:17 AM AEST
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Well written, very moving .
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