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True Bliss
Contributed by
laststarontheleft
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Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 04:09:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Softly, slowly, gently,
With feelings so intently
You gave your heart and soul to mine
I thank heaven for what she sent me
Truly, madly, deeply,
You'll forever hold and keep me
What's mine is yours, what's yours is mine
Together, whole, completely
X X X
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2009-12-14 16:09:55]
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Re: True Bliss
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by Fuzzy on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 01:30:04 AM AEST
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Well written , and a lovely poem.
Take care |
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Re: True Bliss
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by longhaircg on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 07:50:00 AM AEST
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yes TRUE BLISS, so sweet I love this write
as Love simple and true
sp |
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Re: True Bliss
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 06:04:37 AM AEST
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It's truly a blessing
to find some who makes you complete as such
for alone we are vunerable, but together we are unbreakable
Bless you for this write
you're so compassionate
-D.Truth |
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Re: True Bliss
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by ChaosFactor on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 07:05:09 PM AEST
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| Encompasses a very complex feeling in very few words. Beautiful. |
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Re: True Bliss
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by priss on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 10:45:47 AM AEST
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well written and sweet... i really like this one!
~priss |
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