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Father,Awake
Contributed by
karinagutierrez121
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Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 01:48:26 PM in AEST
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Father awake,
its time for a change.
No more games,I just want the truth.
Its things like this that destroyed my thoughts.
Now the little bit of happiness that you brought to me,rots.
Father dearest,wont you understand?
I shouldve believed what they said.
Why can't you just be a better dad?
How may I work towards happines when ive never known a smile?
Father awake,im done trying to make my life worth the while.
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karinagutierrez121
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2009-12-14 13:48:26]
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Re: Father,Awake
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 02:01:02 PM AEST
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This poem really tugged at my heart strings.
Carefully composed, & with strong feeling it rings out.
A very good write x
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Re: Father,Awake
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 09:00:57 PM AEST
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Yes it did indeed tug at the heart strings.
This one hits close to my heart.
Well written verse.......
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