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Twisted
Contributed by
kane
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Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 12:31:02 PM in AEST
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"Did I strike a cord? Have I caused you fear?
Do you hide your face in horror, or just to hide your tears?
Come with me once more on this mind blowing tour,
Where nightmares never die, and people are skined alive."
Belive it or not, I have feelings too,
Never mind the fact, most of those feelings invole killing you,
I mean what's a little blood between two friends,
We can still hang out, except...you'll be dead.
There's a million ways to die, just choose one, and I'll do the rest,
No worries, I'll bang out wife while you take your last breath,
I'll take care of your kids...as if there were my own,
I mean, your my best friend, I will make sure they have a good home.
Why would you say that? Leave me alone.
The voices in my head want me to send one through your dome,
Why are you crying, and what's with the frown,
We use to be schizophrenic , but we're better now.
"Did I strike a cord? Have I caused you fear?
Do you hide your face in horror, or just to hide your tears?
Come with me once more on this mind blowing tour,
Where nightmares never die, and people are skined alive."
Heart & Soul
Kane
Copyright ©
kane
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2009-12-14 12:31:02]
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Re: Twisted
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by Fuzzy on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 01:08:00 PM AEST
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Very well written, very scary.
Take care |
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Re: Twisted
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by emystar on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 01:08:30 PM AEST
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Very mind tangling and thought provoking.
Awesomely uninque write.
Happy holidays back at cha.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Twisted
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 01:36:40 PM AEST
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Wow! Seductively dark & indulgent!!!
Loving this lots, a gritty and fabulous write
well done!
Star x x x |
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Re: Twisted
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by Voice of the Silent on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 03:53:08 PM AEST
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I like this poem, people sometimes see me as twisted, I think you've caught this well, there seems to be a bit of dark humor in this lol, wondering if anyone caught it
anyways great poem
hope to read more soon
-Kelly |
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Re: Twisted
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 07:33:54 PM AEST
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YES THE VOICES CHATTER ENDLESSLY
WELL DONE. |
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Re: Twisted
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by fallensaint on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 08:52:07 PM AEST
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| This is the first poem I've read since i'm new to this site and I must say that I am highly impressed. That poem gave me chills |
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Re: Twisted
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 08:59:00 PM AEST
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I have missed these my friend!
This is dark and twisted and ya know what??
I LOVE IT!
Well done but I never expect anything less.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Twisted
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by LisaTurpin on
Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 04:31:30 PM AEST
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wow.. this is AMAZING! love it soo much.
"We use to be schizophrenic , but we're better now."
SO GOOD! |
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Re: Twisted
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by corpsman2000 on
Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 08:37:48 PM AEST
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| WOW!!!!!!!!!!! lol, this is so disturbing it's hilarious!!!!!!!!!! |
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