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The Fairy Dance
Contributed by
laststarontheleft
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Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 11:44:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Whimsical spins
Of flutter-by wings
As the fairies dance through the sky
Majestical twirls
Bounce softly their curls
As they flitter, and chatter, and fly
Across the moon
They shimmer and zoom
Sprinkling fairy dusts' glittery light
Over and under
With sparkle and wonder
Amidst twinkles of stars through the night
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2009-12-14 11:44:28]
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Re: The Fairy Dance
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by Fuzzy on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 01:09:00 PM AEST
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Oh that's just such a nice poem, and very well written.
Take care
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Re: The Fairy Dance
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by gravity1665 on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 05:02:32 PM AEST
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| you write the way id like too but cant. |
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Re: The Fairy Dance
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by spud on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 07:22:13 AM AEST
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Hi,
Nice one - a great piece of puckish diversion!
Tommy
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Re: The Fairy Dance
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 09:11:54 AM AEST
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Beautifully written, with some mesmerizing images.
-Phil |
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Re: The Fairy Dance
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by JakerBaker88 on
Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 05:33:24 PM AEST
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| This took me back to my chilhood. My parents often told me stories about faries and your poem caputured that childlike wonder their stories did. Simply wonderful. Thanks for sharing. |
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