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Broken Girl

Contributed by Alexa_Bachtel on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 09:42:48 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished



This is just a rain
Got caught me by surprise
While I was comin' back
To my flat
Damn, I've forgotten
My umbrella again
So raindrops washed away
My mascara
And now I'm looking like a
Fully sloven
So what, but I can hide
My tears from everyone
Who's gonna be asking
When has the time come
For us to be over?

They just won't understand anyway,
So why would I explain somethin'
When I know that words won't help,
They won't help to cure a broken girl,
Yes, she's looking like a slattern
But her soul is really ain't right
The pieces of her heart are too shatter
To try putting them back together
What would she do this?

I'm walking in the rain
All alone,
My hairs got tousled
At my face
But I don't seem to care 'cos
Nothing matters anymore...
And this can't be fixed
Anymore...
Though the broken heart beats
In my chest
It makes me feel like it's
Gonna be okay
Just not now while the tears fall
Down my face
And I've got a big wound on
My heart
Now that
We are over.
But I'll speak nothing cos...

They just won't understand anyway,
So why would I explain somethin'
When I know that words won't help,
They won't help to cure a broken girl,
Yes, she's looking like a slattern
But her soul is really ain't right
The pieces of her heart are too shatter
To try putting them back together
What would she do this?

She wolf has turned
To the rotten dog
Cos I'd put my trust in
Your hands
And you've betrayed me with
No second guess
When you unclasped your hands
And I fell
In the abyss like a
Broken doll
Havin' broken my heart
Down...

They just won't understand anyway,
So why would I explain somethin'
When I know that words won't help,
They won't help to cure a broken girl,
Yes, she's looking like a slattern
But her soul is really ain't right
The pieces of her heart are too shatter
To try putting them back together
What would she do this?




Copyright © Alexa_Bachtel ... [ 2009-12-14 09:42:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Broken Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 07:03:05 AM AEST
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Nice release of that silent scream


Re: Broken Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Forever89 on Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 08:31:18 PM AEST
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two thumbs up!! ^O..o^




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