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WaterColour
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 07:41:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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With tears,
all her pain
shall paint
the horizon
a deep shade of blue
that startgazers fear
a heartbeat
in colour
the tone of it
muted
can you hear
the sky cracking
under the artists
wet tear?
With pain
she will break
the world
like her heart breaks
with cold-hearted
whispers
and ice-coated
sighs
can you hear
the world cracking
can you hear
her stop caring
that she's
frozen
and hollow
- but with tears
in her eyes.
With no hope
she will give up
the artist
is fading
the heart
deep inside
gave up hope
to survive
the paint
is all running
the tears
have destroyed it
the blue is still falling
but just from her eyes.
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lostinmyself
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Re: WaterColour
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by shelby on
Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 07:49:32 PM AEST
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Oh Hugs you tight,
this is beautiful in its sadness hun.
I felt it heavy resting near my heart.
Each word tearing at me, I so feel this and relate to you here......
Heres to better days to come!
Love you sweety
pm me if you need to!
Hugs
Shall |
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Re: WaterColour
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by pooja on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 09:51:17 AM AEST
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Truly a classic
An extremely original poem
The title you gave to it was what first caught my eye
The theme of sweet sorrow runs through out
Great work ! take care n God bless u. |
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Re: WaterColour
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 07:39:56 PM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: WaterColour
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 11:22:37 AM AEST
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sadly beautiful,
big hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: WaterColour
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 25th August 2010 @ 06:41:29 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful... The ending is just amazing... You've captured the perfect sadness... I envy this poem.
I hope you write again, my friend, I hope the pen sneaks up on you.
Take care,
David |
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Re: WaterColour
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by silent on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 12:00:43 AM AEST
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| Fits together so well and paints such a vivid but sad picture. I hope you are still writing my friend |
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Re: WaterColour
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by Invierno on
Monday, 7th July 2014 @ 08:09:18 PM AEST
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| gorgeous. a masterpiece |
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Re: WaterColour
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 27th February 2019 @ 09:14:43 PM AEST
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Wonderfully sad.......
Pure talent many years later.
Jim |
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