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Who Could Ask For More
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
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Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 11:11:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Tightly held by arms of sadness,
Hand of fate to wipe my tears,
Loneliness my staunch companion,
Always there to calm my fears,
If I long to know the pleasure,
Of a warm and tender kiss,
Lips of pain are always willing,
Who could ask for more than this.
I look upon my own reflection,
In my shattered mirror of dreams,
A thousand weeping eyes peer back,
And call to me with silent screams,
But still my ears refuse to listen,
Deafened in my world of bliss
I have all I'll ever need,
Who could ask for more than this.
So save your tender words of comfort,
Really now, I will be fine.
I have all a man could want,
Why, I can even call you mine,
And that would just be one more brick,
In my house built on a lie,
Where I can finally lock the door
And have a peaceful, private cry.
L Carling c2003
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Rakerman1999
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2009-12-13 11:11:53]
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Re: Who Could Ask For More
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 01:51:19 PM AEST
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nice write. it sounds like self conflict when dealing with certain emotions and thoughts.Take care,
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Re: Who Could Ask For More
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by shelby on
Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 04:42:23 PM AEST
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Oh this is so sad. I hope you are ok?
It is nice you stopped by, though Im rarely around here anymore either, ( most are now gone).... the old timers ya know??
Well you have my yahoo chat send me a message some time my friend.
Love ya
tosses a daisy and a rose or two back at ya
Hugs
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Re: Who Could Ask For More
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by EternitysLyre on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 10:42:50 PM AEST
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I noted the somber tone in your comment; it's good to see that the oldies are still around. This site is our long-lost teddy bear. I'm sure we'll be back.
Oh, and your simple, unadorned style, combined with the moving sentiments and potent twists, still make you one of the poets that I first aspired to be like. Just in case you didn't know. |
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