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Kill Me

Contributed by Alexa_Bachtel on Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 06:48:16 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

My heartbeat is quick
The respiration is slow,
It smells like danger
But I'm ready to risk
Cuz I feel on top of the world
As you'd like the heaven in hell.

You kill me, kill me, kill me
With your touches
I don't know why,
But I feel it, feel it, feel it
Ooh so right
Don't stop it, stop it, stop it
What you're doing to me
Don't stop what you're doin' baby
But I gotta tell ya that
You kill me, kill me, kill me
With your touches

It's not like what I ever felt
It's something absolutely new
You radiate the danger, baby,
But I know I'll get it through
The bells are ringin' in my head
They make me draw back
But I kinda know there's no chance,
There's no way back from your arms.

You kill me, kill me, kill me
With your touches
I don't know why,
But I feel it, feel it, feel it
Ooh so right
Don't stop it, stop it, stop it
What you're doing to me
Don't stop what you're doin' baby
But I gotta tell ya that
You kill me, kill me, kill me
With your touches

The nets are spread
And I don't know how, but I'm caught
So I kinda get it this is the place
Where I'm losing the direction of my life,
So it seems like I've got just two variants
And I'd choose the lesser of two evils
If I let you take control on my body
Tonight...

You kill me, kill me, kill me
With your touches
I don't know why,
But I feel it, feel it, feel it
Ooh so right
Don't stop it, stop it, stop it
What you're doing to me
Don't stop what you're doin' baby
But I gotta tell ya that
You kill me, kill me, kill me
With your touches

You kill me, kill me, kill me
Please, don't stop...

Copyright © Alexa_Bachtel ... [ 2009-12-13 06:48:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Kill Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Libertina on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 10:47:57 AM AEST
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Well, I like this one, above all the last two lines..."You kill me- please don't stop" that's kind of cool ;)
It's a really nice song, but anyway, I miss an idea of innovation, something really NEW, as the topic is sort of jaded... It's just not far too different from 'Poison' or whatever you may find in the international charts...maybe you could think about one or two additional strophes totally changing the subject
, like...dunno...talking about the weather to get distracted...or you get even more concrete, getting in contact with his very own viper spreading its poison...rofl...ok forget that..;)

Libertina

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