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THIS IS NOT THE DREAM
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 01:21:31 AM in AEST
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I believe in a dream,
Where everything is as it once would seem,
But peace and happiness is a lie,
Made up by those who believe themselves to be sly,
And war is a relationship of love and hate,
That can obliterate,
Without pain,
Those who lived life in vain,
What life may hold,
Is left for us to unfold,
And the future,
Is but a blur,
On your reflection in a mirror,
As you look on in horror,
We are a new breed,
Fueled by greed.
Copyright ©
lonelywolf04
... [
2009-12-13 01:21:31]
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Re: THIS IS NOT THE DREAM
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by Anu on
Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 01:53:14 AM AEST
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| That was a good write but a very pessimistic view of looking at things. |
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Re: THIS IS NOT THE DREAM
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 08:09:30 AM AEST
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This is a very poignant write in everyone's
eyes right now. Your view is just as important
as the next. That is the beauty of poetry, it needs
no retribution, just to be heard is comfort and solace in itself....
Great write
Star x x x
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Re: THIS IS NOT THE DREAM
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 07:46:49 PM AEST
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| Life is indeed thought provoking |
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