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time
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
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i have a lifetime to fail
the way that you have
so here goes...
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fallensilence
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2003-04-05 08:35:00]
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Re: time
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by tease_whizz on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 11:17:16 AM AEST
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| very short (obviously!) but no less effective. in such few lines i get the sense of desperation, resignation and the belief that life is nothing more than a succession of failures. but 'so here goes' suggests a 'bring it on' type attitude. theres no reason for you to fail, keep writing, Kate x |
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Re: time
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 10:07:32 AM AEST
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too true man. reminds me of a song that has a line that goes 'my whole life ahead of me, that a whole lot of time just to fail...'
cool poem dude. gonna read more of ya stuff. TJ. |
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