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~Ice Crystal Blue~
Contributed by
shelby
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Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 07:24:48 PM in AEST
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She wore her special gown of white.
Dusted with diamonds of blue.
Strolling along the still pathways
Holding her heart close and tight.
Hushed whispers gathered round her.
She holds the magic deep inside
Afraid to let it shine.
Wishing for the perfect chance
To rise up with the storm.
Dancing in a storm a dream fading softly away.
She felt the breath of wind begin to stir
As it softly blew her hair.
Then the flakes began to dance around
As the world began to dance and swirl.
She faded in with the winter storm, at one with the ice crystal blue.
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shelby
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2009-12-12 19:24:48]
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Re: ~Ice Crystal Blue~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 09:39:18 PM AEST
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Beautiful.  |
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Re: ~Ice Crystal Blue~
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by Anu on
Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 01:20:40 AM AEST
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| Beautiful Imagination and Picturization.. :) |
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Re: ~Ice Crystal Blue~
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 02:37:30 AM AEST
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Wonderful, beautiful.
Take care |
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Re: ~Ice Crystal Blue~
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 07:35:24 AM AEST
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A really lovely write, picture perfect!
Star x x x |
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Re: ~Ice Crystal Blue~
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 01:16:20 PM AEST
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What masterful use of imagery here. I closed my eyes and could see every image in my mind...like a poetic dream my old friend.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: ~Ice Crystal Blue~
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 01:27:08 PM AEST
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Very imaginative and beautiful. Great work,
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Re: ~Ice Crystal Blue~
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 07:48:39 PM AEST
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| This is so good |
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