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Exploring
Contributed by
OverTheHillsAndFarAway
on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 07:20:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Teardrops fall from the clouds
A thousand kisses shower me
Braches come in contact with my skin
Like your rough cheek
A soft curve, warmed by your presence
That one night
Safe
Secure
Happy
If only for a brief moment
Happiness discovered in your arms
Found once again in the wild
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OverTheHillsAndFarAway
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2009-12-12 19:20:52]
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Re: Exploring
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by shelby on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 07:31:18 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC!
Well for a first attempt I am impressed.
I liked it, and the very ending just rocks.
Good work, I will keep an eye out for more of your work.
Have a great night and weekend
Michelle |
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Re: Exploring
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 04:25:26 AM AEST
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Just loved this, you first poem well bring more.
this is very very good.
Take care |
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Re: Exploring
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 07:44:31 PM AEST
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memorable moments
are
so thrilling..... |
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Re: Exploring
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 11:54:56 AM AEST
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A very sensual piece of poetry.
Closing my eyes, I can feel the sense of touch you have described quite vividly.
An excellent first write, well done!
Star x x x |
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Re: Exploring
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 11:14:28 AM AEST
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This is a good poem. It really can remind people of what they've experienced, and that makes for a good poem, because it immerses the reader into it.
Thank you,
Take care,
David |
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