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thurst
Contributed by
sparkfire777
on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 06:09:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I can feel your kiss, upon my neck
My body in bliss, my mind a wreck
The feeling of pain, all around
Going insane, I fall to the ground
Your venom inside, I can now feel
No longer alive, I am your meal
My pain is gone, I feel so cold
Living so long, I never grow old
Thirst begins, for the vein
Committing the sins, leaving the stain
This isn’t right, I’m all alone
Walk into the light, turning to stone.
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sparkfire777
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2009-12-12 18:09:12]
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Re: thurst
(User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 07:41:49 AM AEST
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Essential reading!
I love this poem, very vivid in my mind of a
past so gladly over for me....
Great write!
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Re: thurst
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 07:29:31 PM AEST
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I Like this
vivid flow..... |
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