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O.K. so Rare
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 02:23:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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No matter how hard I try it does seem
You will always remain the queen
A simple smile from your heart
Will tear my reality, open, apart
Your kindness remains unsurpassed
Every other woman is totally outclassed
You have a magnetism that asks the best
And I will always try to pass the test
You deserve so much love to bring you joy
These words from my heart are no ploy
If I could give you all you desire
I would and I would never tire
The man you love would receive in kind
Such a pleasure we all strive to find
You have to give a love that I know is rare
And like your beauty it too holds my stare
So keep your smile my queen my friend
Don’t ever let your heart bend
It is what makes you such a joy to know
It is the true essence of your love, your glow
Friday, 6 November 2009
11:13:20 AM
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Re: O.K. so Rare
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 01:40:52 PM AEST
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I really like how you describe your lover. The appreciation you show toward her is so rare and exquisite. I hope you two find the best in each other,
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Re: O.K. so Rare
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by longhaircg on
Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 06:02:03 PM AEST
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so much care put in to this poem, she must be a true queen in your eyes
beautiful write
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Re: O.K. so Rare
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by Steel on
Thursday, 9th June 2011 @ 06:42:49 AM AEST
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| Great poem. Your adoration comes through very well. |
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