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Dispelled, Gone, Empty
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 07:10:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Little has changed in my heart
Except now my heart is a void
Empty of all the things that made me feel
Reflecting, I ponder what I may have destroyed
Knowing only too well the outcome
I braved to dispel heartache and pain
Thinking this would be the best path
Thinking that I must, I must refrain
And for a while it seemed to work
My mind cleared, I thought!
Only to find I was covered in dust
Now I am alone and I feel as if caught
This future was not in my plan
Not what I was seeking all these years
Hidden to myself and only surfacing recently
Only to find now I am losing you in my tears
Wednesday, 9 December 2009
2:15:21 PM
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Balmain_Tiger
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2009-12-12 07:10:53]
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Re: Dispelled, Gone, Empty
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 07:40:00 AM AEST
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very well written.
Take care.
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Re: Dispelled, Gone, Empty
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by laststarontheleft on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 12:53:40 PM AEST
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A very heartfelt and well written piece
nicely done...
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Re: Dispelled, Gone, Empty
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by djs on
Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 07:44:18 AM AEST
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| Wow! Not much else to say. Very amazing. |
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