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a butterfly on a string
Contributed by
elle
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Friday, 11th December 2009 @ 10:08:58 AM in AEST
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refined within your negligence
I endeavor kindness
for I have graphed the marks
you've left on me
they settle in to fissures, deep within my spine
tingle there & overlapping, form
the crystal stalk that bids me strength
I am not this tattered memory. . .
husk that you've forsaken
blue-black context twisted in a scream
I am not evasive. . . contemplating. . .
just. . .
a butterfly on a string
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-12-11 10:08:58]
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Re: a butterfly on a string
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th December 2009 @ 12:36:27 AM AEST
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No one deserves the scars of abusive control freaks. Even though I feel much pain in this write, you still rule the metaphor world and write so exquisitely!!!
I hope that string someday breaks.
Tim
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Re: a butterfly on a string
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 01:27:56 PM AEST
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I really liked this. Pain...emotional and physical...brings forth excellent poetry.
Very well done my friend
Roses
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Re: a butterfly on a string
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by ming on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 09:58:14 PM AEST
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Love these words my dear Elle.
I am not this tattered memory. . .
husk that you've forsaken
blue-black context twisted in a scream
I see a gothic tattered butterfly in my mind's eye. Fly free!
Love,
ming |
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