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Red River Ruin
Contributed by
ToxicityOfTheCity
on
Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 01:53:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Overcast and not clear
thats life when you live with this fear
It chokes you down, **** the fit
Makes this thing pound
Hit the ground running
Its your only shot
I hear the echo
and can't bear the thought
of you with him
I fought too hard
ran too long
screamed too loud
make this right
Bone deep and sinking to the other side
I spend my time asking why
It doesn’t matter
My pain, my blood
run, run, run red river ruin.
you made me a believer now all I have is ****
I'm waiting for this high to fade
Hit it again, make sense
**** sense
Its all about pretense.
Profits and dollars
white and blue collars
the world is full, I die tonight.
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ToxicityOfTheCity
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2009-12-10 13:53:50]
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Re: Red River Ruin
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by adub1138 on
Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 06:19:27 PM AEST
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So... I really had no idea that you were pretty angry girl. I mean I knew that sometimes you were frustrated but the more I read this the more I realized this is some good angry stuff.
Bravo!!!! |
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Re: Red River Ruin
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by ToxicityOfTheCity on
Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 10:30:27 PM AEST
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| I'm usually in control of emotions exterior wise but they tend to whirl within sometimes. This is the result. I think I'm angry 50% of the time about something. |
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Re: Red River Ruin
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by laststarontheleft on
Friday, 11th December 2009 @ 07:11:44 AM AEST
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Yep! I agree with adub on this one.
good angry ****!
great write
Star x x x |
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Re: Red River Ruin
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by mattmol13 on
Friday, 11th December 2009 @ 08:15:19 AM AEST
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| very well written. nice work. |
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