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Still This Emptiness Remains In Me
Contributed by
rainbowstar
on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I walked out in the darkness
Surrounded by the cold
Feeling that something was missing
Feeling all alone
My life was here beside me
I had everything I wanted, everything I needed
but still there remained an empty space in me
I walked across a distance
Leaving my thoughts behind
While traces of memories
Swept through my mind
I thought about the things I've said to you
And all the things I've done
All the things I've wanted to
All the things I've left behind
I burried you so deep in my heart
Not planning to make an effort for a new start
But something made me think of you
Something so true
I finally realized I was never in your heart
So what is love if we're two worlds apart?
Even if we were apart, have i ever been in your heart?
I thought and thought endlessly through
Well maybe it's true
You never loved me
You never will
So what is the point for loving you still?
I told you how much I loved you
Even told you all the things i would do,
You never really paid attention
You treated my words like they were broken lies
All you ever gave me, was a simple meaningless sigh
I thought I could convince you or make you say
I love you
But it never happened and it won't anyway
Even if you did?
What would you say?
If I asked you would you die for me today?
I don't know why I came all this way
When just today, I realized it had never came my way
I really loved you
but now a heart of emptiness remains in me
Life was like this
I knew that it was the way it would be
but I didn't want to understand, I didn't want to see
All I really wanted was for you to love me
Nothing really mattered
Until I realized
That love doesn't last, it eventually dies
Forever and ever this emptiness remains in me.
Copyright ©
rainbowstar
... [
2003-04-05 05:05:00]
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Re: Still This Emptiness Remains In Me
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by youngpoet1989 on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 11:52:04 AM AEST
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SAD :(
This poem is sad but beautiful,
I love the way you have writen it.
youngpoet1989
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Re: Still This Emptiness Remains In Me
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by hardcoreputa on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 03:19:45 PM AEST
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| this is a truely incredible poem, all that emotion... i can relate to this poem so much. thanx for sharing it ~Apryl |
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Re: Still This Emptiness Remains In Me
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by ThirtyDays on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 08:58:21 PM AEST
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It is sad, if not sickening, to witness a relationship where one partner just 'absorbs' and 'absorbs'.
One of two things (at least) can happen.. the 'giver' runs out of love to give.. exasperated.. or the 'absorber'.. simply has his/her fill and walks.
I had number 2... and it was horrible.
Your poem touched many of those nerves... so well done.
Be well.. I wish you all the best..
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