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Together As One
Contributed by
laststarontheleft
on
Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 06:43:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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We're falling apart
The world has no heart anymore
But soon we must change, and get back in range
Or this world will be no more
It's going to take time
To make the world rhyme with a harmony so bright
But when we are there, we'll sit back and stare
At the wondrous healthy sight
We can make it work if we try
Men and women as one
Adults and children
Black or white
All living together as one
It's far too important
To let the world go, and destroy the light of the sun
So let's make the best of all the rest
Of our years together as one
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laststarontheleft
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2009-12-10 06:43:47]
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Re: Together As One
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by Fuzzy on
Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 07:06:24 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this.
loved this part.
It's far too important
To let the world go, and destroy the light of the sun
So let's make the best of all the rest
Of our years together as one
Take care |
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Re: Together As One
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by spud on
Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 09:11:10 AM AEST
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Nice one - full of optimism and cheer!
Well done!
Tommy
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Re: Together As One
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by dirk-velvet on
Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 12:02:19 PM AEST
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lovely words
such as yours
bring hope and comfort
to all those
lucky enough
to
read them.
( nice write ! )
Dirk Velvet |
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Re: Together As One
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by longhaircg on
Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 12:54:37 PM AEST
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How beautiful this read so much hope,
all together as one
great insight
sp |
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Re: Together As One
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 03:33:39 PM AEST
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simply inspiring...
take care
-K.Z. |
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