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what is poetry
Contributed by
T_Mariie
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Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 05:14:19 AM in AEST
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I ask you what is poetry.
I ask myself how many more lines till eternity.
How many more lies cries tears and tough times will I have to have?
Can I in my own way strive step over draw new produce provide and induce
My own lines just by closing my eyes
A new birth comes with new unsolved crimes, crimes of rhythms and rhymes
Crimes of flows so cold it’s blowin’ undefined minds
The revolution anew see I don’t do it for the fame I stand up speak loud with no shame
I think when’ll be the next heartbreak misunderstanding, misconception, deception deflection the next pain
The next fake worthless claim to fame
An who’ll be the next one imma’ blame cause’ I know if its me then imma never be the same
The excuses we all make for the bull are oh so lame lacking structure diction and syntax like: life is poetry poetry is life poetry is urbanized Shakespeare for the new millennium, the new millennium is urbanized Shakespeare called poetry
The fabrication of innocuous ingenious words flying around the room like a bird so free words coming from the soul your mind ready to explode like a paragon placate you mind
So the answer to my question how many more lines? Is how ever many more come to mind
So cosmopolitan or sophisticated a cadence so voluminous
Diligently designed to subsist outlive exist
Poetry is alive.
Copyright ©
T_Mariie
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2009-12-10 05:14:19]
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Re: what is poetry
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by laststarontheleft on
Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 05:54:11 AM AEST
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What a greatly executed piece of writing!
i believe that poetry is indeed life itself,
everything that exists and co exists.
it is all around us, ready and waiting for
any mind and soul to decipher and collate it.
Great job! nice write x
Star x x x
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Re: what is poetry
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by robsalinas on
Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 07:04:43 PM AEST
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very nice writing!
great flow to it as well as strong command of words, the message itself is powerful and one that everyone must ponder. Yet you answer it perfectly.
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