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Saw Your Face
Contributed by
justagirl447
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Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 05:04:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I saw your face in my dream-
your dirty blonde hair and sunk in eyes
and it scared me.
I panicked. I shifted
forecully awaking from sleep.
Too concerned to close my eyes again.
Awake I lay at 5am.
But I swear I you were
standing in my doorway.
I meant it when I said
I have no desire to see you again.
But you haunt me
Copyright ©
justagirl447
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2009-12-09 17:04:48]
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Re: Saw Your Face
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by laststarontheleft on
Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 05:43:11 AM AEST
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Chilling!
A fab write, well done
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Re: Saw Your Face
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by Fuzzy on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 01:56:05 AM AEST
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Well written.
Take care |
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Re: Saw Your Face
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 04:02:04 PM AEST
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I like the way you have made this a little eery yet still held something of a mystery back from those who, like me, have read it.
Nice work
Steve |
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