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The Song You Silenced
Contributed by
wordpoet
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Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Do you hear the whispers in the air and the secrets that they tell,
Can you feel the motions of my heart, trapped within this shell,
Do you know things I say to you, when I know you’re not around,
And the way I show the things I say without a single sound.
Do you know the things I give to you, in ways that do not show,
As I watch in vain your feelings, that for me will never grow.
Can you feel the veins of sorrow that have opened on my face,
For the beauty that you are and this life you’ll never grace.
But this song you’ve silenced still lives on, an echo in my soul,
And sings of love that knows no bounds, damned to bitter woe.
Now I cling to heartache like a friend, it’s all I have of you,
While this unrequited love remains, in a hope I can’t undo.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: The Song You Silenced
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by karoody on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 03:45:06 AM AEST
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Doug, this was a lovely write, but i know the pain as well. May your songs be silenced never again. Tis a fool who refuses to hear it...
Kara |
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Re: The Song You Silenced
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by Dreamer18 on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 04:33:45 AM AEST
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| Great poem! This is sad and so many people can relate to it. I pray that one day you may find the one who won't silence your songs any longer. |
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Re: The Song You Silenced
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 09:21:26 AM AEST
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| Excellent Doug...you have captured the feeling of one sided love to perfection. Heart wrenching write. Well done my friend. Larry( rakerman) |
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Re: The Song You Silenced
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 07:03:51 PM AEST
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Doug this was so touching & beautiful!
One day Your heart will sing again!
Good peice! Christina |
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Re: The Song You Silenced
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 04:07:38 AM AEST
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| Doug ... I cried as I read this poem ... you have written it with such feeling ... if only words like these could reach inside someone's heart .. then the world would be at your feet. .. Jan |
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Re: The Song You Silenced
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 10:14:45 PM AEST
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| wow, this really moved me, so much truth and feeling in this poem, i love it but it also hit a nerve within' me...hugs nessa |
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Re: The Song You Silenced
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by Lia on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 12:06:54 AM AEST
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| my oh my Doug..how in the world did I miss so many of your poems lately?? *smacks herself*...you are still writing beautifully regardless of my absence... |
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