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~Lost inside myself~
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 06:20:04 PM in AEST
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These days I walk in misted haze
With a lonely sigh silently escaping.
Really not at all myself, consumed with broken moments.
I see the light at the end of it
So near yet so far, but running round in circles
After awhile, beats me to the core.
Each day going through the motions.
So many around feeling the same way.
People everywhere, blue and dismayed.
It hangs in the air, suffocating the beauty.
The holiday season in full bloom,
Lights dancing in the windows.
Yet the sense of gloom and doom
Dancing ever close around me.
I feel I am the ash, of yesterdays now past.
Burned to bits of rubble scattered in the wind.
Lost inside this big city, not knowing where to turn.
A fast escape from the misery is exactly for what I yearn.
So once again instead of ash,
I can be my blooming self.
Ride the fire that has consumed me
Brighter than before……………….
Copyright ©
shelby
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2009-12-08 18:20:04]
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Re: ~Lost inside myself~
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by spud on
Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 01:52:58 AM AEST
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Hi Michelle,
An honest emotional insight.
Hang in there!
Tommy
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Re: ~Lost inside myself~
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 02:04:08 AM AEST
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Hey shel,
Wat up?
I've been caught up in family matters for a while so I haven't been around much.
Good work.
Huggs, luv, blessings,
emy |
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Re: ~Lost inside myself~
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by blackroses_bleedinghearts on
Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 06:32:41 PM AEST
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good insight.
very heartfelt and emotional.
i could relate to every part of it |
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Re: ~Lost inside myself~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 10:27:53 PM AEST
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I seriously relate to this sad poem. Ugh, the feeling of being so forlorn and so much dismay.
Lost inside this big city, not knowing where to turn. That is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo me too.
Damn well written.
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Re: ~Lost inside myself~
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 06:40:34 AM AEST
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Masterfull as usual and yet
so real and genuine, your
the epitime of litterature at
it's best, " I feel I am the ash,
of yesterdays now past " never,
more like the birth of what shall
always define, a classic artitst . . .
((((Michelle))))
Ben . . . |
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Re: ~Lost inside myself~
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by dirk-velvet on
Sunday, 13th December 2009 @ 02:44:02 PM AEST
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timeless feelings.
put down with a fresh approach.
nice use of words.
(clever write!)
Dirk Velvet |
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Re: ~Lost inside myself~
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by inkmaster on
Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 08:21:21 PM AEST
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| I know these fellings you are spiting at life all to well ..A great read i gig it.....Inkmaster |
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Re: ~Lost inside myself~
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by UnknownLegend on
Sunday, 16th May 2010 @ 08:48:56 PM AEST
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Reminded me of some leonard cohen Lyrics Michelle. Believe me a total and unequivocal compliment.
"And who are you?" she sternly spoke
to the one beneath the smoke.
"Why, I'm fire," he replied,
"And I love your solitude, I love your pride."
"Then fire, make your body cold,
I'm going to give you mine to hold,"
saying this she climbed inside
to be his one, to be his only bride.
It was deep into his fiery heart
he took the dust of Joan of Arc,
and then she clearly understood
if he was fire, oh then she must be wood.
nice write Michelle..... |
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