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Its Me
Contributed by
justagirl447
on
Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 12:35:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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But its not him that I hate.
Her pale blue eyes,
Soft skin and perfect teeth.
Her wall that shields her,
The way the guys stare at her.
She must think she’s better
Then everyone else.
How could she?
As the months go on,
He body only gets slimmer.
Even more beautiful she becomes.
But those eyes hide pain,
Guilt.
Was her mistake a justification?
To see if she really could have him,
Then rid of him.
Then she expects him to come back.
Talking becomes begging, and he wont have it.
But its not him that I hate.
Its me.
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2009-12-08 12:35:04]
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Re: Its Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 01:27:02 PM AEST
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I cannot believe you are not getting any feedback from anyone!!!!!
This pains me, as you are writing so well
& yet seem to be going un-noticed!!
I think you should focus on what is
beautiful about YOU &, once you have, your
whole outlook on your peers will change.
You will feel more beautiful and self confident, & that is the most powerful feeling
in the whole world, believe me!
Keep writing, I will be looking out for you x
Luv Star x x x
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Re: Its Me
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by Fuzzy on
Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 01:57:32 PM AEST
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I can only agree with the above thoughts and comments.
and keep writing.
Take care |
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