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scribble scratch
Contributed by
ming
on
Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 10:48:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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white eddies
swirled upwards
then
back down
soul tender
with fitful
sleep
my comfortable
blanket of madness
misplaced
under morn pinked
sky
pretty pen found
paper just paper
leaning towards
upside down
getting closer
than a misplaced
turtledove.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-12-08 10:48:59]
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Re: scribble scratch
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 01:46:54 PM AEST
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Some nice imagery, especially this bit:
'sleep
my comfortable
blanket of madness
misplaced
under morn pinked
sky'
Good stuff!
-Phil
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Re: scribble scratch
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 01:02:07 PM AEST
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Quite an array of imagery
"Soul tender with fitful sleep"
There aren't many words to impress upon
how tangible I wish that phrase was
for sleep is so magical
and souls so precious
Solid write
-D.Truth |
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