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one way conversation
Contributed by
pat888
on
Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 09:30:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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dont leave me standing here tonight
let me whisper in your ear
i know the words you need to hear
i love you
dont touch that knife tonight
everthing will be allright
with every cut
i feel your hurt
i love you
you dont speak at all
but i hear what your saying
you say there is no god
but i allways hear you praying
i love you
and i know that your needing
a man to believe in
so just take ma hand
lets go away
i wont let you down
i'll be here to stay
i love you
just give me a chance to be
all that you need from me
i havent changed
i screwed up one time
i took to much and had to much wine
i love you
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pat888
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2009-12-08 09:30:29]
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Re: one way conversation
(User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 02:00:28 PM AEST
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This has such an honest and true
way about it. Your words are meant
so deeply, like a warm blanket of comfort.
A beautiful piece, well written x
Star x x x
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Re: one way conversation
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by blackroses_bleedinghearts on
Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 06:27:09 PM AEST
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i like your title =)
and i LOVE the poem!!! |
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