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Falling
Contributed by
laststarontheleft
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Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 08:17:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Ho do you tell a person
That you've fallen in so deep
Without mentioning a word?
That is a secret, hard to keep
Forbidden to be spoken of
Incase it breaks you up
Such a word that seems so little
Yet can mean so very much
I know I mustn't say it
Or it may just run away
But I don't know how to overcome
My feelings on this day
Show me how to say it
In a way that speaks the truth
To spread it's wings upon us
With divine eternal youth
Copyright ©
laststarontheleft
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2009-12-08 08:17:18]
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Re: Falling
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by Fuzzy on
Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 08:57:40 AM AEST
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lovely poem
Take care.
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Re: Falling
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 10:00:12 AM AEST
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| shes in lurrrrrrrve! |
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Re: Falling
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by spud on
Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 10:01:23 AM AEST
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Hi,
I'm the last person to give advice on this subject,
but your questions ring a bell or two.
Well versed!
Tommy
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Re: Falling
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 09:21:50 PM AEST
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I'm with Tommy. I'm the last person to give advice. So does thatt make him second to last now? 
But yeah, I can certainly relate to these thoughts.
Thanking you for an enjoyable read.
Tim
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Re: Falling
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 09:43:01 AM AEST
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ahh yes, that intriguing subject...
indeed, telling you love someone is like
not knowing whether some explosive will
blow up right in your face or not...
maybe not a good explanation haha,
but it really is hard to tell if u should admit
how you truly feel towards the person.
all i can say is that only YOU will know when
the time is right. It's just one of those things...
Great poem
take care
-K.Z.
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