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My Favorite Sin . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 07:10:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You
were the brush of an artist
on a lonely canvas called
me,
a
stroke of perfection
portraying our love
for all of the world
to
see.
You
were the pen of a poet
in a book called you and i,
on our pages of love
for you i would fall long before
the ink was
dry.
You
were the tone
of a sweet violin
seducing my inner core,
my senual sonata
easing me in
that left me longing
for
more.
Slowly weaving each other
with patterne of taunts and tease,
deep in the bliss
of your sweet abyss
coming and going with
ease.
You were the rapture
i couldn't rezist
the gamble i couldn't win,
if i were the devil himself
to be sure,
you'd be my favorite
sin.
And
sin we did
my lovely wife
when you were just my girl,
inside of you we built a life
that soon became our
world.
Now they are grown
and out on there own
all that's left is where we
have been,
yet more than forever
i'll love you so and would do it
all over again.
Whether brush or pen
or a symphony
a second in time or eternity,
of one thing forever
you can be sure
my commitment to you,
shall forever
endure.
Ben
myheartsvoice . . .
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Re: My Favorite Sin . . . Ben
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 07:41:50 PM AEST
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Wow..this is some eternal declaration of love!!!
Great write, Ben...as always
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Re: My Favorite Sin . . . Ben
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by northernlights on
Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 11:53:40 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem full of love and commitment,rich in heart deep in sentiment and a value this world will never truly recognise lucky woman |
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Re: My Favorite Sin . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 8th December 2009 @ 12:29:59 AM AEST
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My friend, ben,
If there's another man on this planet that luvs his wife any more than you do, I wonna see it.
Beautiful.
Say hi to joan for me and you'll have the best holidays ever.
huggs, blessings, smiles,
emy |
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