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Our First Kiss

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The other night
Was amazing
You were everything
I dreamed
It seemed as if
The stars were out for us
Us alone
You put your hand on me
And held me there
I never felt so beautiful
You looked into my eyes
Put your arms around me
And took my breath away
Our first kiss
Was beautiful
All I could ever ask for
All I ever dreamed

Copyright © ShadowsCloud ... [ 2003-04-05 00:45:00]
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Re: Our First Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 06:53:25 PM AEST
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I like this and it reminds me of my ex that I want back. I don't know how though. If you can look at my peoms at Trisha or Chickenhead

Re: Our First Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 02:05:58 AM AEST
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Lovely.
I wonder hoe Beryl felt about ours?

Re: Our First Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 08:07:51 AM AEST
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Hey Candice,
a very well thought out poem you have created here. It's very difficult to put into words these most wonderful of experiences.
You've done it very well.

With love
Dean:-)

Re: Our First Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 03:13:04 PM AEST
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Dean,
How right you are. It was rather difficult to put this moment into words, but now that it is done I am rather happy with it. I am glad that you enjoyed it.

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