|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Bitter love
Contributed by
wandererjrb
on
Sunday, 6th December 2009 @ 10:17:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
Chocolate.....
Oh my dear chocolate why have you decived me ...
My dreadfully beautiful chocolate
A fruitful lust of agony
Such as yours shall never
Be forgotten
My dear.. dear chocolate
Whos lips shall you melt today
Whos lips shall you poison
Whos lips but mine shall you
Envoke your love to now
My dear .. dear chocolate
I'm A fool for falling for you
The warm bitter love
Youve laid apon me
...has melted my heart
As tho a loving
Summers sun
Were to gently wrap its
Warmth around it
My dear loving
Chocolate
By Juan Ramon Benitez
Copyright ©
wandererjrb
... [
2009-12-06 22:17:35]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Bitter love
(User Rating: 1 )
by joydeep_nath on
Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 05:55:57 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| beautifully written..simple yhet with depth |
|
|
Re: Bitter love
(User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 07:13:35 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is lovely, sad but lovely all the same....
Star x x x |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
