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A Ship.
Contributed by
KarinaGutierrez121
on
Sunday, 6th December 2009 @ 07:09:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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My God.
Theres a ship right beside me,
thats bursting into flames.I can barely breathe
as they all plead for help.
Everyone on board stares at me and says,
"We'll all have a peaceful death in the end"
The Captain falls to his kness and prays.
Parents Jump and leave children in need.
A ship thats made its last trip is on the verge off crashing.
As it burns to the ground,They all try
to keep their heads' above the waves.
As we try and keep them alive..
Many make it...but others werent as lucky.
But now theyre in a better place.
Copyright ©
KarinaGutierrez121
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2009-12-06 19:09:47]
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Re: A Ship.
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by deadwriter on
Sunday, 6th December 2009 @ 07:18:55 PM AEST
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A very emotional write for a young writer. Powerful images!
Deadwriter
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Re: A Ship.
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by Alexa_Bachtel on
Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 06:35:35 AM AEST
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Very beautiful and emotional poem. Good work. It's kinda remind me the "Titanik" movie. ;)))
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