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genesis
Contributed by
green
on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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you are my first thought when i rise you have invaited my heart and mind my familiar tears have dissappeared-even darkness shines like a stray amimal who has been abandoned and abused ,you stay in my sight and coax me too come to you.your blue eye's entice me,if i were to gaze into your eye's you would memerize me.i wish love wasn't this way,but if i take there's always a price to pay.so i stand right here on the edge of forever and pretend to fly and hover over a fantasy of us together.in your arms is where i blong.in your ocean of compassion is where i choose to die.death to broken dreams.resurrection to a new life.eternity was created with my love for you in mind.there is no end to what i feel for you inside.
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Re: genesis
(User Rating: 1 ) by the_wampum_pimp on
Friday, 1st December 2006 @ 10:03:52 AM AEST (User
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You should work on breaking the lines down a bit, this just seems like a confused paragraph |
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