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The Tide..

Contributed by nate996 on Sunday, 6th December 2009 @ 03:46:44 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

You break me in to pieces,try to put me back together.
Some day i'm gonna break for good, be done and gone forever.
I can't keep going through this, otherwise i'll die inside.
I'll rise and then i'll crash right down just like the ocean tide.

You can't hear anything i say, just push it farther out your way.
I try and get you out of here, keep coming back, can't get away.
I can't keep going through this, otherwise i'll die inside.
I'll rise and then i'll crash right down just like the ocean tide.

I'm getting sick, i'm dying out, i need to be away.
I'm burning out, im dying now, i need out right today.
I can't keep going thorugh this, otherwise i'll die inside.
I'll rise and then i'll crash right down just like the ocean tide.

You two need to stop arguing, it's tearing me in ways.
My life keeps going by so fast, years turning into days.
I can't keep going thorugh this, otherwise i'll die inside.
I'll rise and then i'll crash right down just like the ocean tide.

Dying so fast, i'm slipping by. Catch me before i go.
It's times like this, i die inside, that's it i'm letting go.
I could not keep doing this, so now i'm dead inside.
No rising anymore inside, i've crashed just like the tide...

Copyright © nate996 ... [ 2009-12-06 15:46:44]
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Re: The Tide.. (User Rating: 1 )
by Alexa_Bachtel on Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 06:40:42 AM AEST
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Very good for the fist poem. Interested writing and style. I love it. Keep the pot boiling.
Alexa.

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