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The Artist's Line
Contributed by
laststarontheleft
on
Sunday, 6th December 2009 @ 03:08:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The artist's line
Is so divine
It's beauty without measure
The way it dips
And swells, like lips,
To bring you so much pleasure
It's loving arms
Embrace the charms
Within your deepest mind
Your soul it seeks
Then catches, keeps,
To all else you are blind
The strokes shine soft
'Gainst moon aloft
A love to always cherish
Shades gracefully cast
Through present, past,
And future till you perish
Copyright ©
laststarontheleft
... [
2009-12-06 15:08:01]
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Re: The Artist's Line
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 6th December 2009 @ 10:39:22 PM AEST
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| beautiful write x |
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Re: The Artist's Line
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by spud on
Monday, 7th December 2009 @ 01:59:39 AM AEST
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Hi,
I like this!
Short, sharp, and a precise rendering of the art
of 'Art.'
Well scribed!
Tommy
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Re: The Artist's Line
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by ToxicityOfTheCity on
Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 01:34:39 PM AEST
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| I think it's sensual an decidedly romantic. Good Job. =] |
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Re: The Artist's Line
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd February 2010 @ 04:12:30 PM AEST
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I found this quite beautiful and reading your work you have a style that captivates the reader with each passage. Well done.
duff |
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Re: The Artist's Line
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th February 2010 @ 11:15:07 PM AEST
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Love it!!!! I could see brilliant colors, the artist's strokes, and the artist going down in history.
Thanks
Tim |
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