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Please Remember...
Contributed by
BetterTomorrow
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Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The beautiful stars I’ll never see
The loving person, you’ll never be
You pulled me close and pushed me away
You’ll never leave, but you won’t stay
Your lies promised me relentless tears
But your lustrous eyes swear happy years
The frustration of loneliness in your presence…
Forgotten when you’re gone and, lingers still, your essence
How do you relinquish truth when you know I love you so?
Why must you disregard joyful times from not long ago?
Please, Don’t forget me; don’t overlook my affection…
Remember how we felt… we’ll always have that connection
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Re: Please Remember...
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by LJ on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 02:43:54 AM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem...as for advice....that will take some thinking and praying! |
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Re: Please Remember...
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by Dreamer18 on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 04:13:17 AM AEST
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| Hey, this was a really good poem. You wrote from teh depths of your heart. You can't ever make a guy see what he's lost until its too late. So let him see the thing that he lost and move on to someone who is worthy of your love. |
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