Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	22-November 19:31:09 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Depression

Contributed by DEVZ on Sunday, 6th December 2009 @ 02:08:39 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I look outside at the sunny sky then close the curtains I wanna die.
I live in darkness everyday hoping the pain will go away
but that's not gonna happen here instead Il keep the pain and fear
I try to hide but that's no good you see its running through my blood
i wonder what will make it better, pills? a knife? mustn't forget my letter
but waking up to a nurse again i realize its not the end
the days keep coming they're just as bad this is why im very sad
hoping for god to strike me down so I can loose this constant frown
my hearts giving up its got no go as for my mind its getting slow
I want to leave this twisted place that's made me crumble and loose my grace
to find somewhere better not near but afar maybe Il find me my own little star
so I can look down and see where I was and chuckle a little maybe because
the depression has lifted its no longer here I can be happy there's nothing to fear
the sun shines brightly I soak it in, chilled out and relaxed with an ear to ear grin.

Copyright © DEVZ ... [ 2009-12-06 02:08:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by tswilkins on Sunday, 6th December 2009 @ 11:14:14 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I have felt this way before. It is good to write down your emotions as they are. It is good to express yourself. Depression is such a cruel darkness because it oftentimes just doesn't allow you to see the light that is shining right before your eyes, and it creates emotions that are really hard to bear. But your purpose is great, and you can accomplish many wonderful things even though it may feel like you're better off leaving this world. People need you. This world needs you. Thank you for sharing your feelings.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com