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Bringin' On The Heartbreak
Contributed by
Alexa_Bachtel
on
Saturday, 5th December 2009 @ 03:55:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It's occurred, don't you deny it
My heart was wounded about thorns
Of those roses you given to me,
I sank in your promises and words
Clearly seeing them won't come true,
I walked on splinters of the broken glass
Slice by a slice I was giving my soul
I caught in the moment when I lost my faith
But maybe, I'm just tired of waiting.
Maybe, there was the best way to break out
I'm so sorry, but I couldn't find it
That's why I should admit, I should state
That it's more that I could've taken.
Cos' you're bringin' on the heartbreak
You're bringin on the heartbreak
Causing me an intolerable pain
Which I am compelled to pay blood
Instead of the tears appearin' on my face
Would you release me if I have told that
You're bringin' on the heartbreak?
You're bringin' on the heartbreak
Can't you see?
Am I really similar to the sinner
So you make me go through this hell?
Because with you I was never free
Realizing that if I start to cry once
Than I'd keep cryin' for the rest of my life,
Because having seen that I can be weak
You would not stop on the reached
Cos you would make something that'd
Eventually force me to figure out
That I've got only one way out.
Maybe, there was the best way to break out
I'm so sorry, but I couldn't find it
That's why I should admit, I should state
That it's more that I could've taken.
Cos' you're bringin' on the heartbreak
You're bringin on the heartbreak
Causing me an intolerable pain
Which I am compelled to pay blood
Instead of the tears appearin' on my face
Would you release me if I have told that
You're bringin' on the heartbreak?
You're bringin' on the heartbreak
Can't you see?
I wanted war of the bodies which
Have concluded an armistice,
I wanted a new dawn,
Instead of eternal night
And now the Devil looks at ruins
Of that house we've built,
Trying so hard to create
Our personal little paradise.
Maybe, there was the best way to break out
I'm so sorry, but I couldn't find it
That's why I should admit, I should state
That it's more that I could've taken.
Cos' you're bringin' on the heartbreak
You're bringin on the heartbreak
Causing me an intolerable pain
Which I am compelled to pay blood
Instead of the tears appearin' on my face
Would you release me if I have told that
You're bringin' on the heartbreak?
You're bringin' on the heartbreak
Oh, can't you see?
Can't you see?...
Copyright ©
Alexa_Bachtel
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2009-12-05 03:55:15]
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Re: Bringin' On The Heartbreak
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by beehappy on
Saturday, 5th December 2009 @ 11:18:48 AM AEST
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| Sounds like it would be a really good song! |
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Re: Bringin' On The Heartbreak
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th December 2009 @ 08:33:00 PM AEST
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You're very very close to the chorus from Def Leppard's Bringin' on the Heartbreak with the repetitiveness
You're bringin' on the heartbreak
Bringin' on the heartache
You're bringin' on the heartbreak
Bringin' on the heartache
Can't you see?
Oh
Almost right out of...
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