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- My Dreams -
Contributed by
143
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Friday, 4th December 2009 @ 11:44:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Hello my baby, hugs and jolly time...
I sure have missed you
but forever your always mine...
I know you cant see me
because were far away...
I wish that you were here
for this is what Id say...
you are so beautiful...
look at them eyes...
your hairs turned golden
and your smiles like mine...
I love you my wonder
forever keep our strength...
and know this endlessly...
our love will never sink...
now run and play
my dreams fading away...
it wont be to long...
before reality comes my way...
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Re: - My Dreams -
(User Rating: 1 ) by Deidra_Carmichael on
Friday, 4th December 2009 @ 12:45:50 PM AEST (User
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This is very creative and this makes a great father-daughter poem. It makes me think of the song by Billy Ray Cyrus "Get Ready, Get Set, Don't Go." |
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Re: - My Dreams -
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 4th December 2009 @ 09:14:08 PM AEST (User
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Hello friend,
How sweet and beautiful.
One can feel your love for her in these words.
Smiles, huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: - My Dreams -
(User Rating: 1 ) by rambo56 on
Saturday, 29th May 2010 @ 09:06:01 AM AEST (User
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lovely peace of work |
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