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Break Me Down

Contributed by Redmurcury on Thursday, 3rd December 2009 @ 03:03:37 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Broken Pieces pick me up
Find me scattered
Hold me close
I am shattered
Gather shards of constant pain
Hold them close and don't let go
Loving warmth between your arms
Never will I leave you
No more chances No more harm
I can't go on without you
Look I found a special piece
Fold our love along a crease
Fold again look what I made us
Pretty rose that's what I made us
I know I always cause regret
But close are we I can't forget
The many times I knew I loved you
Never doubted for a second
Please don't leave me
Please don't break me
Don't let sorrow undertake me
Love forever I can do
Love me never please don't choose
Understanding its my fault
My heart falls from the highest depths
Living suffer constant pain
Knowing our love's not in vain
Why cant I just fix myself
Put my problems on a shelf
Close the door and lock the cage
Twist the key and throw away
I never meant to harm or hurt you
Let me pick you up
Let me pick me up
I can put us back together
One true love united, strong
I understand that I was wrong
That's all that matters I need help
Help me please to fix myself
Hearts forsaken lines were crossed
I am dropping all the pieces
Give me time to find the pieces
Don't give up I'll find the pieces
I'll do anything for you
Once again our love is new
Please don't leave like I left you
Our love is real
Our love is true

Copyright © Redmurcury ... [ 2009-12-03 15:03:37]
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Re: Break Me Down (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 3rd December 2009 @ 11:53:36 PM AEST
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I'd say you have mastered the conquest of speed writing.
There's nothing wrong with this write.
You did a great job with this.
Keep up the awesome writing.
Huggs, blessings,
emy

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