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Up To You
Contributed by
longhaircg
on
Thursday, 3rd December 2009 @ 07:36:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I give you my heart, all of it not part,
Sweet love deep the soul, for you to hold,
treat it with kindnees watch it grow,
feed it with dreams sceams of life,
smiles glowing inside out, without doubt,
eyes connect surely see,
all living between you and me,
dark time falls around us,
heavens stars guide us,
trust each other, never break,
only mistakes, shared between,
as one we can conquer,
talking in the rain, no words needed,
feeding it hand in hand, arm in arm,
hearts speaking the loudest,
I give you my heart all not just part,
enternity connected two hearts,
sweet darling it takes two its up to you,
Copyright ©
longhaircg
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2009-12-03 07:36:49]
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Re: Up To You
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by laststarontheleft on
Thursday, 3rd December 2009 @ 07:48:15 AM AEST
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What a charming poem, and so
tenderly written, well done!
Star x x x |
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Re: Up To You
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by beehappy on
Friday, 4th December 2009 @ 08:22:53 PM AEST
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| Heartwarming effect! Nicely written! |
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Re: Up To You
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by ChaosFactor on
Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 11:02:16 AM AEST
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| Beautiful. That takes a lot of courage and strength.. Take care. |
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