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world turns
Contributed by
ming
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Wednesday, 2nd December 2009 @ 01:01:35 PM in AEST
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fine-edged new
grief disconnected
reality edge wears
& real ache begins
tear-spotted soul
falling forward
heart hits 'the wall'
profound noirness
of existence
tilted off like
a marionette
with a broken string
above a door
the poetic nevermore
world turns.
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ming
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2009-12-02 13:01:35]
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Re: world turns
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by elle on
Thursday, 3rd December 2009 @ 05:46:09 AM AEST
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:)
the intricasy of your words is like a flower budding. . .
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Re: world turns
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd December 2009 @ 01:50:16 PM AEST
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Elle has put it very well indeed. This was very nicely written, especially this bit:
'heart hits 'the wall'
profound noirness
of existence'
Noirness. What a word!
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