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The Movement Of Ecstacy.

Contributed by bleedthelove on Wednesday, 2nd December 2009 @ 11:42:21 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Helpless, I have become so helpless to your touch
Like any addiction, I have become restless...
Restless for you and the way you make me feel
So touch me...
Because from this moment and all the days to follow
Until the angels forsake me and render me hollow
I vow to rest beside you...my soul at the very edge of your fingertips
A slave to your existence
Because the closer I am to you
The closer I am to God...
So take me in your arms
Flow through me
And I will flow through you
Steal my breath away
Because I'm already suspended in your grace
I'm so moved by you
Deeper than I ever thought
Hear the sound of my heart
Pounding in my chest for you...
Press your body against mine and let the love bleed through
With every bit of my energy
I will breathe you in until I get high
Because the center of your world pulls me down
As if the universe is rolling over me
Crashing into you I see
The birth of destiny
The movement of ecstacy
The taste of your skin
My body is giving in
Giving...in...
Because I'm helpless...
Helpless to your touch.

Copyright © bleedthelove ... [ 2009-12-02 11:42:21]
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Re: The Movement Of Ecstacy. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd December 2009 @ 11:46:50 AM AEST
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I would say you have definitely conveyed the "movement" of ecstasy very well here. Nicely done.

Thank you for an enjoyable read and keep up the good work.

Tim
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