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Questions of a caged bird
Contributed by
ribbons_and_lace09
on
Tuesday, 1st December 2009 @ 06:34:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Tell me why you even bother to stay,
And this time, don’t tell me another lie.
Tell me why you left my arms for hers,
She must be ten times more beautiful than I.
Tell me if her lips taste like mine,
Tell me if she loves you like I do.
Tell me if she says your name the same,
Tell me why I’m not good enough for you.
Tell me why you always said, “I love you,
You’re my one and only.”
You promised you would always love me,
And that you would never leave me feeling lonely.
I feel like a caged bird,
Longing to be free.
How long did you think you could have her,
At the same time you wanted me?
I wonder what you will do,
When she leaves you like you left me.
By the time you open the door,
I will have already spread my wings and flown free.
Tell me, was she worth it?
Was she worth loosing me?
You can only hurt the one who loves you so much,
Before the spread their wings and fly free.
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Re: Questions of a caged bird
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by inkmaster on
Tuesday, 1st December 2009 @ 07:39:24 PM AEST
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Very Strong words I can feel them flow out of your heart..I liked this..Thanks for sharring,,
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Re: Questions of a caged bird
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st December 2009 @ 08:26:59 PM AEST
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Good job by both of you.
smiles, blessings,
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Re: Questions of a caged bird
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by tswilkins on
Tuesday, 1st December 2009 @ 09:11:10 PM AEST
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| Excellent title. It's emotions so many of us have felt, and it is great to be able to relate to your words. Good job. |
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Re: Questions of a caged bird
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd December 2009 @ 01:22:16 PM AEST
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Very nicely put together by the two of you, seamlessly structured. It was a frank and honest poem.
-Phil |
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