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December Storm
Contributed by
windowguy
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Tuesday, 1st December 2009 @ 11:16:25 AM in AEST
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Waves crash on worn rocks
Salty sea spray in strong breeze
Gull peacefully glides.
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windowguy
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2009-12-01 11:16:25]
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Re: December Storm
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by jo8196 on
Tuesday, 1st December 2009 @ 05:01:32 PM AEST
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| Very good. you might want to consider the to change the title to something like: The Sea or something along those line. |
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Re: December Storm
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 1st December 2009 @ 07:36:37 PM AEST
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Great imagery.... December Storm is ideal... since it's what happened on our islands today....
Jenni |
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Re: December Storm
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st December 2009 @ 09:44:54 PM AEST
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title is perfect!
I love these writes about the sea. They really get to me. And when
it includes a storm ... *sigh* be still my heart. I'm captured with
every word. Excellent haiku, my friend.
~ Breezy
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Re: December Storm
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 1st December 2009 @ 11:02:06 PM AEST
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don't want to be caught in one of those things!
great job
take care
-K.Z. |
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