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Blood Stained love
Contributed by
DemonQueen
on
Monday, 30th November 2009 @ 07:06:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You're a freaking phlegmatic, when the chances pass by
I'll forget what you've done, when the evidence dies
Romance is my weakness, a loss from the start
I only give in, and, in turn, lose my heart
I'm falling for you, what can i say?
I'm losing my mind, it's another mistake
Don't want to know, don't want to care
I'll lose you again, it just isn't fair
Love is a maze full of blood stained lies
You'll witness my heartache with unfaithful eyes
I'll walk throught the shadows, hold to the dark
Waiting for someone to tear out your heart
You wish you were safe, but the road doesn't end
The voices inside will become your new friend
Not that it matters, they'll leave you too
They'll never come back, it's your turn make a move
Your love is tainted, and always has been
You played with my heart, it's your deadliest sin.
Copyright ©
DemonQueen
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2009-11-30 19:06:49]
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Re: Blood Stained love
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by jessb3 on
Monday, 30th November 2009 @ 09:21:54 PM AEST
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| Love it! A fantastic poem that I can definitely relate to. The two lines that speak to me the most: "Romance is my weakness, a loss from the start. I only give in, and, in turn, lose my heart." How very true. Great job! |
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Re: Blood Stained love
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by ChaosFactor on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 08:35:21 PM AEST
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This is once again fantastic and insightful.. I love it.
Particularly: "Love is a maze full of blood stained lies"
Very true, and very well said. I hope to read more soon. Take care. |
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